Fantasia Archsage Reviews "Morning Gone Wrong" · 5:06pm Apr 3rd, 2014
“Morning Gone Wrong”
Written by DGGames
Reviewed by Fantasia Archsage
Alright hello everyone, This is the Fantasia Archsage Reviews, and I’m here to bring you “Morning Gone Wrong”.
Now I’m pretty sure quite a few of you have read this story judging by its views, so I won’t make this long… oh what the heck, who cares I’m doing the review anyhow. No one tells me how long to make my reviews! Okay.
Now, reading the description stop reading and looked over to the picture and was like “Pfft, there’s no doubt about this fic not being funny.”
The description was done very well for a comedy fic, and when I looked back at the views again, I was like “Yup, this is sure a great fic to start off my gray day!” And I have to say I made the right choice in reading it.
The beginning was written pretty normal, it was a nice opening for a comedy. The day basically started off rather normal till he looked into the mirror.
When Cadence walked into the room, I was a little surprised she didn’t start blasting away. But then again that’s what I would’ve done if I were somehow a princess to walk and see another woman in the room, it’s the end for that lady, no questions.
Anyways moving on with the reading, another scene in the story where Gleaming Armor(Shining Armor) had to convince the soldier that she was shining armor’s cousin, that was funny because think about it, what if the soldier didn’t fall for her trick. That would’ve been one funny twist leading down to so many paths of comedy.
The whole story was written great for a comedy. Definitely, no one was out of character. The dialogue exchange was excellent. I believe for a comedy if the dialogue doesn’t make the reader laugh or at least giggle then two things must be wrong, the author didn’t write the dialogue exchange between the characters right, or the reader has no sense of humor.
Now what was my favorite part of this story?
Well everything, my wise reader. I have nothing wrong with the way it was written. I would definitely say if you want a casual comedy fic not too long, just read this fic. Of course, there are others, but the shorter one shots are the best ones to read. One to save time, and two you can get practicing quicker.
Okay, I think I got nothing more to say about this story. I was definitely a great read, and it lit up my day giving me more than enough energy to write the review. Again this is Fantasia Archsage Reviews of the story “Morning Gone Wrong” which is fairly quick read if you want to small laugh. Written by DGGames and Reviewed by Fantasia Archsage
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