1st Lazarus Chapter remake nearly finished. · 7:58pm Apr 1st, 2014
So the grammar Nazis are officially storming this story, and jeez did they pack a punch into the poor punctuations lines. (Except for this blog post. This here is the only place I cun right tribly an gat ehway wit it) Yeah, and I can't even begin to explain to them how much this means to me. Not only does it help make the story seem nicer and easier to read. A few of them even question a few points I never thought about, which in the end is good because if they stick with me till the end. This may intentionally prevent some any major plot holes or mistakes down the line, Lazarus is starting to look good again everyone. And I sure hope you enjoy this as much as I am rewriting it.
Besides the 1st chapter being nearly done, I am also working on a new Star Swirl journal entry for the pony back story. Let alone the secrets the humans left behind after their downfall.
This sentence is awkwardly phrased.
'This' and 'here' don't mesh well together.
*can *write *terribly *and *get *away *with
Also, those sentences are wrong.
And you are missing (•_•) a few... ( •_•)>⌐■-■... commas.(⌐■_■)
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1974384 As much as I love you right now... I can't stop hating you.
1974476 Derm grermmerz ernd sperlerhnger erh rerler berd, doe.
Also turtles. I brought you meatloaf!
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1974476 I wouldn't have it any other way