Falls and Follies rewriting/ One minute series update

I have been bucked in the face by one of the groups I am a part of, by a prereader who rejected Falls and Follies, and then by the rejection from the royal guard. Does this mean I will cancel Falls and Follies? No, read the title. I did realize thought that just a few weeks exposure here has improved how I write, and that I lied with saying I would CONTINUE to provide high quality fimfiction. Especially the first chapter, but all of them that are out need to be reread by myself, and I will try to fix the many, many mistakes I made. I will put out good fanfiction, or work hard until the day I can, so please work with me and tolerate my problems.

For those of you who could care less about my first fanfic and am here for my true romances, start here.
If you read the first chapter of Falls and Follies, and then read One Minute to Impact, you would realize how much my writing has improved already from minimal exposure to this wonderful site. I am including a post about my One Minute Romance series, to announce that it is a series. None of the same characters will probably ever be shipped again, and here is where you all think I'm crazy. No, they are a series of romances that all start with the words 'One Minute.' The series is based off of the event that truly begins a relationship, from the one minute, to when they actually accept their feelings for each other. I have ideas for a good few shippings, and one is already written, pending review and artwork. Any last comment might be considered hype, so Pinkie, Cheese, and I say goodnight.