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I am an avid reader and writer on Fimfiction. So much so, that I simply do not have the time to be writing a long biography.

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  • 297 weeks
    Ten Little Ponies YouTube Reading

    Hey, I still exist! I know I know its been forever, but life is crazy.
    Just wanted to leave this here. Below is a link to a playlist of a dramatic reading by Agent0Fluffy!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BeVBkKd2mGQ&list=PLx33b6yjUU5fx3biusyWJHFsQ_pev8zns

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  • 371 weeks
    Eleven Little Ponies

    At long last, "Eleven Little Ponies" is finally posted. As with the prequel, I WILL NOT be following the exact story that Rooster Teeth did. This first chapter is similar to introduce characters but the story will separate. There will be references and possibly similarities, but don't assume that my story will end the

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  • 373 weeks
    Eleven Little Ponies Update

    As I said before, I am hard at work with my new story "Eleven Little Ponies" and of course, albeit a bit later than I wanted, I wanted to give you all another teaser for the story.

    This time, we get to meet the leaders at The Pony Core.

    First up, the head of the program himself:

    (Shining Armor vector by: CloudyGlow on DeviantArt
    Edit by me)

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  • 374 weeks
    Writing Update

    Hello Everyone, Happy April Fools Day! Yes, I understand the irony of trying to get serious information out on a day of constant deception but trust me I'm telling you the truth.

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  • 385 weeks
    2017 Update

    Hey everyone happy 2017!

    I'm going to make this quick. I have been writing a bit in college however my life is pretty busy and I am trying to find motivation to do multiple different hobbies. I never got around to writing enough to release anything new. That being said I do think that I will have some motivation to write in a bit. Hint...Hint... :moustache:

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Mar
23rd
2014

For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils Review · 3:45pm Mar 23rd, 2014

Huh, A Sweetie Belle episode? Well, this one will probably be similar to that other one.

ONE VIEWING LATER

Oh...My...Gosh. THAT WAS THE BEST EPISODE EVER!!!

So, the episode starts with Rarity freaking out about a set of dresses she needs to make for Sapphire Shores. Sweetie Belle tries to help but messes everything up. She also tells Rarity that the CMC needs their costumes remade the next night for their play. Rarity nervously agrees and then races against the clock.

At the play Rarity barely makes it and the CMC perform the show. However, no one remembered anything other than the dresses and Sweetie Belle believes Rarity stole the spotlight once again. She storms home, confronts her sister and goes to bed. Sweetie Belle wants revenge too and so she removes a thread from the main headdress of Sapphires costume. She then dreams about Rarity ruining an awards show for her and that Rarity was a creeping cloud thing. However, HARK! (Or dude look over there) Princess Luna comes to save Sweetie Belle. Then the two have the most amazingly brief and powerful conversation ever.

Sweetie Belle: Yeah, probably dreaming.
Luna: I understand what you are going through Sweetie Belle, I too have a sister who often shines more brightly than me; and with this I have struggled.

Wow...that's a connection. Why would I even bother with the rest of the episode. Just end with that.

So anyways, Luna shows Sweetie Belle that Rarity never meant to hurt her. Plus in a very Christmas Carol aspect, shows the future for Rarity if Sweetie Belle messes up the headdress. There were even dolphins. Okay? So Sweetie hurries to Canterlot, saves the Headress, even sees Luna in the real world and everyone is happy. We even learn that Sapphire Shore's lucky animal is a dolphin, and that they "swim with her in her dreams." So Luna can show other people dreams to someone while their dreaming. Wow, you learn something every day.

This episode was amazing. I can't even formulate words on how good it was. The characters were like-able and Luna once again proved that she was the better and cooler sister. The story was unlike anything seen in MLP. The references, the plot twists, the foreshadowing; all of it, and I could never know what was going to happen.That takes talent. The dream visuals were zany but controlled which is a delicate balance. The conclusion between Rarity and Sweetie Belle was sentimental and it was cool that Luna helped Sweetie Belle. I think that the conclusion was better than the Sister Hooves Social. The humor was there, but I didn't count it for this episode since it was definitely more serious. Plus, I really wanted this to get as the Game Grumps said: "TENHOTTATEN"

Characters: 9/10
Story: 10/10
Visuals: 10/10
Conclusion: 9/10
Overall: 10/10

I loved this episode, and remember 10/10 doesn't mean a perfect episode, it means an episode that I deem worthy of being one of the greats. :moustache:

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