MThe Interloper
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A group of war weary Terrans find themselves thrust into an alien environment where good is good and bad is bad. Or is it? These brave men will discover a world very alien but also very familiar.
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513 weeks
Ermagherd... The Interloper...

So, I haven't updated in a while. Mostly because of the Army keeping me busy for a few weeks and work making me close up shop a lot lately, which means I go home and veg out before going to sleep.
However, not all was lost in that time.
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522 weeks
Welp....

I finished those chapters I was working on, which means I now have to work on a few more chapters from the ground up. But I feel as if I've gotten a system down pat. Which is good, it means I can add more to the story more efficiently.
Hell, within a week I managed to add over 17,000 words and like 4 chapters. I think that's pretty good.
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529 weeks
More work done on story.

So, Like I mentioned in another blog post. I work on about 3 chapters at a time, putting in a rough outline and fleshing them out from there in a chronological order. It also helps to keep me from painting myself into a corner and having to use the "Deus ex Machina" which I REALLY hate.
Anyways, a TINY spoiler:
Chapter 6- Burn the Witch ~35%
Chapter 7- Rusty Cage ~25%
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530 weeks
I'm Interloping on through, again.

Next chapter of the rewrite is up. I originally intended to put it up last week with about an 1800 word count and use it as a transition chapter, but I decided to flesh it out. Which in the end felt like a good thing.
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533 weeks
The Interloper

Well, I've currently restarted work on the Interloper and a good portion has changed. I'm currently working on Chapters 3, 4, and 5 as I type this up. The rewritten chapters have been posted and the great Maromar for volunteering to clean up the mess I make as I write this story. And definitely thanks to the readers willing to read the drivel!
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2014

The Interloper · 1:40am Mar 21st, 2014

Well, I've currently restarted work on the Interloper and a good portion has changed. I'm currently working on Chapters 3, 4, and 5 as I type this up. The rewritten chapters have been posted and the great Maromar for volunteering to clean up the mess I make as I write this story. And definitely thanks to the readers willing to read the drivel!

Many thanks for your patience!
Johan

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Drivel? You good sir, are selling yourself much too short!

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