So here's the deal · 5:36pm Mar 20th, 2014
Ok, I have looked over some of the chapters on here and I shall go and look over the other chapters and fix them as best as I can. I will also post the chapters that I have fixed, so that way everyone can keep the story going. Also this cool be a great idea to add in some of the stuff that I had cut from the original script, so in a way this will be much better. As I can now add in the stuff that was scraped from the original plot.
Sound good