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Leoshi


I don't judge. Out loud.

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  • 44 weeks
    [Humility] Unlocking the Unfinished Experiment

    Well, I wasn't able to keep my promise. I began work on Humility's updated version, made some nice headway on it, and then...just...so much happened. But I'm not going to echo the same excuses. Stuff happened, and Humility sat incomplete, and...I keep thinking about it and feeling like I left part of my best work unfinished. I suppose that's true.

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  • 184 weeks
    [Ikusa] Original Novel

    Not sure if this'll reach many people but I figure it's worth a shot. Hi! I know that a long, loooooong time ago, I was sharing some details on my game project. It started here, but continued in different ways and for

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  • 209 weeks
    Fullmetal Pony Resources

    Seems I can't do anything right the first time. Well, here's the in-progress collection to every single resource, note, draft, scrap, and plan I had for FMP. This is everything except the private messages between me and Twilight Is The BEST. And even now I'm still not done cleaning and formatting all of the documents in it.

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  • 268 weeks
    Voice Acting: Highlight Reel for Karasutengu

    I was recently cast in a fandub for Inverted Crown Productions, in the role of Karasutengu, the villain. I got permission from the project director to make a reel of my performance, and it took me all afternoon to get it hosted properly. So:

    Karasutengu Highlight Reel

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  • 271 weeks
    A Couple'a Silly Prompts

    I asked my buddies in a Discord server to give me some writing prompts because I wanted to create without rules. They came up with two, and they seemed to like 'em. So, I'm gonna share them here too.

    A prompt about that humpback whale found in the rainforest.

    And...

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Mar
19th
2014

[POLL] RwR Asides and the Prestige Edition · 11:44pm Mar 19th, 2014

It's already known that I have a selection of filler material in the works for Rain without Rainbows, which I affectionately dub Asides. While some are slated to be seen here on FIMfic, others are meant to be exclusive for the Prestige Edition, adding to the experience gained from it. But lately I've been debating the best way to go about it when it comes to all of these side-stories.

I'm of two minds about the nature of including the Asides for the Prestige Edition. My original plan was to place them all after the eighteenth chapter, in their own section, like how a fan-work of an original story would normally go. Lately, however, I've been entertaining the idea of mixing the Asides into the Prestige Edition - and even seamlessly incorporating them into their appropriate chapters when possible.

The sequence of events, therefore, would be like this:
0: Not Yet Ablaze
1: Prologue, and The Wishmaster
2: Tryouts
3: No More Dreams
4: A World without Rainbows, and Mysteries Solved
5: Bitter Truth, and Lost Cause
6: Assault
7: A Dark Tree
8: Blame Where Blame is Due
9: The Need, and When We were Young
10: The Root
11: Defiance
12: I Want to Blame You
13: Still I Grieve
14: Seed of Darkness
15: The Eclipse
16: Conflagration
17: Harmony
18: Kindred Spirits
19: Where Land Meets Sky
20: Dying Embers 1: Smothering the Blaze
21: Dying Embers 2: Fading Glow
22: Dying Embers 3: Warmth
23: Dying Embers 4: Ashes

It's either this new way, or keeping them all at the end and leaving the original chapter sequence alone. So I'm looking for opinions... What do you guys think is a better move? Use this new, Aside-added method? Or stick to my guns and leave them at the end?

Also, I can't provide any cute pony in today's blog because I just typed this whole thing on my phone. I need new thumbs.

~Leo

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Comments ( 1 )

I think if they fit in fairly organically then they should be intermingled in the story itself. If it's an in between chapter thing maybe consider naming them like "Intermission 1: Next Time It's Personal", "Intermission 2: The Reckoning" and so forth. If they are scene sized then wherever in existing chapters would work better I think.

That being said this route is a lot more work but I feel it would be the much better payoff.

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