Edits · 8:27am Mar 15th, 2014
Hey guys.
I'm in the process of murdering editing Where All Words are Written at the moment, at the suggestion of a friend. Let me be the first to say I hate talking with editors when I write, I always feel like I can't protest what they're saying, even if I don't like it. Then I get scared that if I don't do as they say they'll find out.
Anyway, I'm editing it a bit. Apparently I have too much text, and my descriptions are overwrought and flowery (my words, not hers, she just said they were unbalanced). Hopefully this will get some better ratings, as it stands I have 7:3 in favour of the thumbs down and that's really disheartening. if you have any contributions, please comment and let me know so I can consider them.
Oh, and for anyone who wondered what Angel looks like:
Cheers,
Addison
Yay! Good luck! And let me know if you need any help
1932848 ohai. yeah, I don't really know what to correct on my own.