TSC: Sweetie's Diary

Warning: This might contain spoilers for TSC up to—but not past—the latest published chapter.

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[Alphaetus_Prime]

Let's get that hype train a-rolling.

[Cast-Iron Caryatid]

every shard I saved, I killed.

This needs a note saying one of the shards deserved it

Also kind of needs to be a bit higher res. Even opening it in a new tab and zooming, it wasn't what I would call comfortable to read.

Anyway, this means it's soon, right?

[RoboRed]

Mmmyes...definitely a change in Sweetie since the beginning. Especially when one notes the amount of times she wrote "killed" and scratched it out until she just apparently stopped caring anymore, then had a written breakdown.

Also, upload in better res, dude. I had to break out the magnifying glass to read this and even then, it got tricky at some points.

[EurekaStorm]

When is the next chapter coming??
I've been so excited for this one!

TSC is the very first mlp fanfic I EVER read. And it turned me on to so many other wonderful stories! Now, I even started writing my own fics.

So, thank you, TSC.
If it weren't for this story being as AWESOME and AMAZING as it is, I never would've starting reading fanfiction at all.

[Siras-chi]

Does this mean that the new chapter will come soon!

[SilentBelle]

Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm rooting for you, Sweetie Belle! Awe and amaze me, as you never fail to do!

[Wanderer D]

1903780 1903746 There.

[Prismic]

I guess technically this spoils a little of the next chapter, since we're left off with her in the hands of Brucie, not Scoots =P But it's an obvious assumption, so no harm no foul.

[RoboRed]

1903926
Grazie.

1903931
Yeah, true...but oh well. I'm getting treated to more TSC after several months with no update, so I'm not complaining.

[Prismic]

1903948
And I'm getting something tangentially EoP after a year since the edit, and two since the last update. That plus TSC, and I'm not complaining either XD

[thewookie1]

At this point I believe the only way Twilight will be coming back to Sweetie's universe is either if the shards automatically reform Twilight when she returns home, or she brings a Twilight from a destroyed universe back with her somehow.

[RoboRed]

1903967
Indeed. Certainly that foremost.

[FanOfMostEverything]

Poor Sweetie. I do hope she lands in a relatively nice Equestria after this one.

In any case, great preview. Definitely got me looking forward to the next installment.

[Assasin_Asha]

Can someone tell me what is the scratched out word at the end of the sixth paragraph? The one replaced with "apathy"? I have hard time figuring it out...

EDIT: I already know, no need to keep answering!

[Zephandolf]

Poor Sweetie Belle. I hope that the EOP wasteland doesn't get to her like the FO:E wasteland did; though as far as we know, ponies didn't cause this cataclysm. I am interested in seeing Scootaloo's reaction to seeing a living pony for the first time in twenty-five years without jumping back in time.

[Midnight herald]

1904249 laziness

[Luminous Lead]

1904249 Laziness, I think.

[powerpony13]

1904249 laziness i believe

[Terrorizer231]

1904249 It's "laziness".

And please tell me that this means you're continuing Fragments. PLEASE!

[Assasin_Asha]

1904259
1904268
1904269
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I knew it's something obvious... for some reason I thought that "z" is a "g"...
Thank you all!

[Super_Big_Mac]

Don't worry, everybody! As an editor for this fic, I can safely tell you this next chapter will be out before you can say Candleja

[Prismic]

1904285 Candleja
...
...
...
I expect apology muffins =P

1904219 So naturally, things can only get worse from here.

[Super_Big_Mac]

1904330 I hope you actually got the joke, otherwise my comment was wasted.

[Web of Hope]

[archonix]

1904357 The whole thing about Candlejack isn't that you disappear half way through saying Candlejack, but that Candlejack comes and

[Super_Big_Mac]

1904416 Then you've never read the TVTropes page for him.

[archonix]

1904424 I have. I also saw the episode when it first aired.

[Hobbestc]

1904416 Lol, I see what you did there.

[Super_Big_Mac]

1904444 I've never seen the episode, sadly. I'm just doing what I've seen others do.

[conantheimp]

How much of End of Ponies would actually be recommended to read for the upcoming chapter? I only got a few chapters into the Fluttershy arc before I wanted to pitch my e-reader across the room in hatred...

Like, do we just need to know the basic premise of Scootaloo being the last pony and being able to go back with dragon-fire to investigate what went wrong? Or do we need to read a majority of the fic?

[Rising Vision]

1904522

Someone once wrote a song about Mr. Candle I think. As far as I know no one knows more than a few verses. The lyrics go on until you sing Candle Jacks name for the first time and then

[Super_Big_Mac]

1904577 This is the song that sadly ends, it just can't go ever on my friends, it halts before the music descends, as Candlejack will always

[Wanderer D]

1904570 You're good

[Mad Pancake]

i.imgur.com/ofdU2c1.jpg

[playnwin]

Is this story alive? I want to believe this, but I need proof!

[thorium220]

1907712

Stories never die, they just go to sleep.

[Lord Xaos]

1903746 That's one of looking at it.

The other way is to point out that the shard was absolutely correct since that Twilight really was fighting in her own self-defense.

[Cast-Iron Caryatid]

1927287
Except that's not the fragment's stated motivation. The fragment doesn't want to let anyone through the maze because Bluebelle spent so much time on it and she doesn't want to see it go to waste, not because she fears for her safety and/or existence. In fact, she expresses great delight in the idea.

Twilight’s eyes widened and then her smile grew crooked. “Tell me, do you... take the other fragments into yourself?”

Sweetie blinked. “Well yes...”

“Oh, that’s priceless!” Twilight clapped her hooves together. “I can’t wait until you get to me and add me to the other me’s!”

Come to think of it... Sweetie absorbed some of Twilight's power and personality with each shard... I wonder if that includes what they've become after they were separated from Twilight...

Oh well, I guess there was only the one that was really any different. I can't imagine it being important