So I was wondering... · 4:26pm Feb 26th, 2014
For those of you who read Twilight Velvet's Creative Spark, my first major story here, which chapter did you like best? Which was the best written, most interesting or most stimulating escapade Velvet had?
If it's been a while for you, here's the breakdown:
Ch. 1: Velvet and Big Macintosh in the barn
Ch. 2: Velvet and Rarity get a special treatment from the Spa Twins
Ch. 3: Velvet gives Spike his first blowjob and they're almost caught by Twilight
Ch. 4: Velvet gets her groove on with Snowflake and Thunderlane at the gym
Ch. 5: Pinkie and Velvet reenact an S&M scene from one of her books
Ch. 6: Velvet helps out Zecora in more ways than one with a futa spell
Ch. 7: Spike and Rarity confess their love and have goodbye sex as Rarity goes off to war
Ch. 8: Velvet infiltrates the Diamond Dogs and has a gangbang to gather intel Bond-style
Ch. 9: Prince Imago has sex with Velvet disguised as Night Light
I've just recently been reflecting on that story, since it's the first clop story of such length I've written and I wanna know what worked and what didn't. (Reason being, I'm thinking of doing another one like it after Ponyville DxD, but probably not directly connected to Velvet.)
Any feedback on that would be nice to make my future stories even better. Personally I was kinda partial to the scene between Spike and Velvet. It was both touching at points as well as animalistic and the tension with Twilight at the door seemed so high.
What do you guys think?
Chapter 1 was my favorite.
I loved chapter 6, but then again, I'm a sucker for both futa and breast expansion.
Chapter 1 was good but I was also quite partial to Chapters 3, 4 and 6
I enjoyed 7, but I am a Sparity person so my choice might be bias
1875711 Kinda have to agree with you there,(well anyone with my main man Spike lol) but yea i think it would be interesting to see a character we don't see often be in the spotlight. I think the major would be interesting lol.
1,3,and 4
all the odds
Chapter 7 was really good.
I have to say Ch. 1: Velvet and Big Macintosh in the barn was my fave.
Ch.6
I love Zecora and futa.
My favorite was chapter 4
I'm gonna have to go with Chapters 1, 2 and 4. I like hetero but the twins were good enough for me to have a look at lesbian sex.
For me it was a toss up between Ch 1 and Ch 4. They were all very well written, but for me it was the story in these chapters that got me, how she slowly got started and how she teased and tormented the two guys before giving them what they really wanted.
Chapter 2 and Chapter 4.
Chapter 1 (noticing a trend here?)
1875991
Yeah, Chapter 1 does seem to be the favourite, although personally I felt it was the most clicheed.
4 also seems to have a good number of votes. That one was fun to write.
I don't know, I liked so many of them. 1 was just the one with one of my fav pairings :S
Chapter 1 and 4 were the best ones in my opinion.
Here are my top 3:
3. Chapter 4
2. Chapter 6
1: Chapter 8
Chapter 6 hit me by surprise because I normally turn away from futa clop scenes, but the one in Chapter 6 was really well done.
The Sparity one is my favorite. It was a different style from the others, because Velvet wasn't directly involved in it. We could all see and assume what was happening through what was heard and said, not by what was seen. It was a fun exercise for the other senses to get a workout. All the others, regardless of the variety actually have Velvet in an active role, because she was a partner. But that one, Velvet was a spectator (a rather unwilling one at that, but hey what could you do?). And of course, it is one of many that help her write out her new novel.
After Chapter 7, then it's the Diamond Dog gangbang as an alias, followed by Velvet and Big Mac (classic romp in the barn--simplicity is still good).
TL/DR: My choices (from first to last):
1/ Spike and Rarity having goodbye sex before Rarity goes off to war
2/ The Diamond Dog gang-bang in the mines for info on Twilight's disappearance
3/ Velvet and Mac's romp in the barn
Chapter 3, though I also liked 6 and 7.
Chapter 4. Because Thunderlane.
Chapter 3 was my favorite. I liked the pacing and the emotions. And I really enjoyed the part where Twilight is talking through the door, it was both funny and sexy at the same time.
Ch. 3, 6, 8 and 9
As much as I love futa, chapter 2 was definitely my favorite.