Simile to a Good Home · 5:36pm Feb 20th, 2014
I made a simile, but while editing I am finding that it's just not fitting in with the surrounding prose. I think that it would do well in a different story but I simply don't have the right place for it right now. It's friendly and lighthearted, evocative and clear. I have named him Dilbert.
Come here Dilbert! Here boy!
...wings flailing like a foal’s legs kicking the air.
Isn't he so sweet?
I can't help feeling a bit responsible for this....
But in the end, I think both you and Dilbert will be much happier this way.