Warning on the 16th chapter of The Sneezing Changeling · 9:13pm Feb 9th, 2014
To all readers of "The Sneezing Changeling", the 16th chapter "The End?" is in need of revamp. So unless you want to read a chapter in which everyone who commented it has given a negative critic, avoid this chapter for the moment.
Edit : Now deleted (it will be easier)
Yeah, a lot of people really did not like your Celestia did they?
Thank you. If you ever try to make a character go against his/her virtue, be sure to give a really strong back story. It wouldn't make sense that Celestia would just wipe out the ponies memories just because she's lazy to calm her nation.