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Fixed most of the grammatical errors.
Fixed a problem with the chapter title numbers.
Added more to the end of chapter one!
GO CHECK IT OUT!!!
http://graybard.tumblr.com/
There ya go XD
Finally got my story published, and I'm waiting for mod approval.
This is my first story EVER read by those not within my inner circle...
Or in short I'm terrified beyond reason.
Oh and yet again, sorry I took so long, and thank you for being patient.
Well, happy birthday to me I guess...sorry about the story being late shadowgear, I just need a little more time to get it as right as humanly possible XD
I NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. LOTS OF IT.
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