Clarification · 9:04am Feb 4th, 2014
Reposted because I forgot to mention some things.
The Safe Word Is...
[Teen] [Sex] [Romance] [Comedy] [Human]
Prince Geo has been dispatched to the Gryphon lands on royal business while his wife, Princess Twilight Sparkle, has been left behind in Canterlot. Also going with the Prince are Spike, who will be the couple's primary source of communication and Geo's friend John, who is only going along for a change of scenery.
While Geo is attending to his duty, a letter from Twilight arrives — which explains in clear detail what she is going to expect from her husband when he gets home. Spike and John, seizing the chance to have some fun, decide to write a letter back to the desperate mare... which results in all three males getting a surprise.
I saw a comment on this story that made me want to write this blog post. It was from Lightingace, and said the following:
Yeah…hate the idea, not funny dude, not funny at all, it was horrible and I imagine Twilight must be fell terrible for what she just did, bottom line…no, not your best…
Well that's unfortunate. But why did you hate it, hmm? Let's read on.
You know what, no, in my opinion it was horrible, mark him, put him under his will, RAPE him! For the love, you just RAPE him god, I…I just couldn't read after 'I want to be your servant' I just skip over hopping the air will be clear before something horrible happen, that ending…no…it not compensate.
The idea of the safe word and being dominated could had work WHEN BOTH PARTIES AGREE, LITTLE IMPORTANT DETAIL, If not its just plain down right RAPE,
Do you have any idea how much reading this comment pissed me off? Because it pissed me off a lot. But why has it pissed me off, exactly? For one reason, and one reason only: THIS ISN'T A RAPE STORY.
Did I even suggest that anything happened after Twilight closed the door? NO, I DIDN'T. For all you know, Geo could have managed to talk her round, and then had Spike and John thrown in jail for trying to pull a fast one.
Rape, incest and foalcon fics are just three things that I will never, EVER write.
If someone like it, fine, I will not judge but asking me, it was a complete zero, sorry but you had done some REALLY good job, and this…this is not Geo, this is just one horrible creepy pasta and I don't like that.
No creepypasta here, it was all me.
I hope this clears up any misconceptions you may have about this story.
I appreciate people leaving comments, but seriously — make sure you know all the facts before you say shit like this.
With that out of the way I hope…no BEG please don't let this abomination be cannon with your story PLEASEEEEEE,
Yes, it is canon. It is set during A Season Of Adventure — in the eleven month gap between Twilight and Geo's coronation, and the rise of Doctor Robo.
You really couldn't find another picture for the cover art?
Cause the current one is creeping me the fuck out.
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If you've got any suggestions, feel free to share them.
I just used that one because it seemed to fit the story.
Sorry to piss you off dude, and its a HUGE relieves that it was not rape, the idea of Twilight don't getting his husband its not enjoying and its just suffering scare me, scare me BIG time. I suppose it was suppose to be with a joke but I wonder.
Spike its still a baby right? How is that he know about the dominatrix and all that, I know what you leave at 'close door' its to let everyone to the imagination.
The reason why I think it could happen its,
1) Twilight has magic that could immobilized anything
2) Its unstable because she is on heat
3) She probably though that it was part of the game because of the safe word
4) She never had done that before
Yeah its scare me A LOT because I don't see how Geo can calm her enough before she mark him and scar him for life.
Imagination or not…no, even if Twilight stop by some miracle, something like that will scare Geo so much he probably will want to stay away from her, please, oh PLEASE tell me nothing happen and give reason to believed Geo escape without a mental or physical scar
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Spike is not a baby any more. He's got wings now, and is at the same level of maturity Rarity is.
Nothing happened. And Twilight wasn't in heat, she was only acting the way she was because of what the letter said.
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Oh thank GOD! thanks Geo, for a moment I though you stop, caring for your stories, but you didn't, you care, still I didn't see the joke, that its not pulling a fast one, what John and Spike almost did…I think its illegal…ok I see why the jail thing.
Boy I'm sure Twilight was in rage too after what she almost did, seriously they pass the line they pass it HUGE time it was not worthy at all on my opinion, not a single bit
What was the image Spike drew on the ground?
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That's up to you to decide. Use your imagination.
Translation: I couldn't think of anything.