Lazarus Chapter 50% Done! Plus Update · 1:10am Jan 30th, 2014
I'm taking my sweet ol'time but it's nearly done. Just got done writing quick funny/combat scene with the Mec (Spelt that way for Mechanized Exoskeleton Cyber-Suit totally not ripped from X-Com) first time ever writing a full legit fight scene at least one I'm taking slightly serious because of the small amount of comedy added into it. Now you're probably not wondering how do you have comedy in a fight scene? Especially in a story that's been trying so hard to take it self seriously with the Sci-fi fantasy. (Pssh that's lie, I never take my stories seriously. Remember the last two chapters?) Well I'll tell you, I have not a fucking clue!
Seriously I don't, I'm experimenting. Now Lazarus always had a bit of comedy implemented into it, but not that much. But if you know me and have been following my stories. You'd know that I have to have comedy in a story at least every chapter or every other. Unless it's a complete plot filled scene, mostly because that'd kill the mood. But if you've read the latest Butler Chapter you'd know that even then I'll add little chuckle or two in there.
But who knows, you Sci-Fi Hardies (Yeah I made up a word so what) or even you big plot guys might not even a find it funny. Matter of fact you might hate it! But meh, that's jut how I am. And if it does kill the mood, I'll make sure to never do it again. The comedy though is mostly just character interaction (like most comedies are) and not anything to do with the battle itself.
Also I'll possibly be editing the last two shitty chapters, I won't change much. All I'm going to do is fix the the controversies that are in there, but I will not change the Celestia and Luna throwing the human's out (Prepares for the barrage of punches) okay, okay I know you all don't like it. But hopefully the next chapter will kind of clear it up.