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shirotora


I'm just a simple, southern man that loves ponies, Star Wars, ridiculousness, and adorable things. I'm also an ex-Navy nuclear machinists mate, and life long martial artist.

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Jan
28th
2014

Chaotic Harmony, new and improved · 9:05pm Jan 28th, 2014

The Chaotic Harmony Cleanup Project is now underway! The prelude is up and ready for your pleasure, other chapters to follow. Special thanks to Thoendithaas for his help. Grammar and punctuation are greatly improved, as is the whole flow of the story. There will a few minor changes as well, like extended and added scenes, so it might be worth a reread. Edited chapters will be marked as such.

P.S. Did the prelude come up as "unread" for anyone? I tried unpublishing then publishing it again. If not, does anyone know how to do that?

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It didn't showed up as unread, But I know it is possible. Jump of the Iron Dragon for example is jumping out with new-old chapters in my list lately. It has something to do with deleting chapter, and posting completely new one in it's place, But I am not sure. You need to ask an actual author, I am just a reader.

By the way. Because of this rewrite, I will have to reread this... again... third time now. UGH!! It is not like I have so much free time.

And. If I may ask something? I'll copy-paste (with minor edit. I am not so afraid of putting possible spoiler here.) my question from new chapter of Children of chaos.
"that... sneak peek(?) we had earlier, you know, that one with razor going back in to the right time and killing that counsellor, or whoever that was, I cant find it now. and then starting some tale celestia. you know which one, and I won't say more, do not want to spoil it to anyone. is this one canon? Because if yes then it would be even more interesting."
And, please answer, or I'll just sent this to you in PM

1769544 No, it isn't cannon. It was going to be the prelude, but the story has changed a bit so it no longer works. That's one of the reasons I deleted the "sneak peak" chapter.

Also, you don't have to reread CH if you don't want to. The story is the same, just cleaner and with a couple extra, extended, or altered scenes that don't really change anything, just make it flow a little easier.

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But that is the problem, I want to read this again, it is one of my most favourite stories on this site. I am rereading those around one every a year, depending on length, maybe more. Your for example can take me a week of reading, and other authors are still publishing new chapters.

oh i know this is late and what not, but to re-release a chapter, you have to delete the original, and then post the new one where the old one was.

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