An update for ya'll on Power Windows.

Part 2 of chapter 3 of Power Windows is about 60-70% finished.

Here's a little preview.

The shaman looked to his feet to find they were walking backward, but when he looked up they were still moving forward. Celendros shook his head a bit to try and clear it, that only made it worse though. His vision became red before his legs began to feel heavy, like sandbags were attached to his ankles. Before he could do anything, they fell right out from under him and his vision blurred.

He could tell his friends were saying something, but everything was fuzzy and muffled, like his ears were covered. “I... I...” was all the barely conscious shaman let out before his eyes began to force themselves shut, “Cac... tus...” Then everything went black.

Get hype.

Also i'm going to take this chance to ask a little question. What would you like to see from the story? And in what way do you think it can be improved judging by what you've of part 1 of chapter three?