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  • 164 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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  • 192 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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  • 192 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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  • 197 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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Jan
12th
2014

Twiny - Art Section ( Full Galery ) · 8:40pm Jan 12th, 2014

Hello everyone.

Considering that the final update to the story "Celestia's Tiny Student" is coming up very soon ( story what I will try to upload on Equestira Daily, though I expect it will be hard ) and I am unsure for how long I and my editors will edit the sequel. I decided to upload every single tiny Twilight art I found on deviant art for you to enjoy.

I have been collecting them into this folder for past months, though I didn't really found many and hopefully one day I will draw Twiny on my own.

Anyway, here is Twiny gallery I collected so far, enjoy (and sorry for bad grammar, I am writing without any editor assistance) :

Lets start with Twiny chilling up on Princess's nose, the autor who draw it as a cover for my story deserve a solid hug ( especially considering that he draw it after a painful operation on his face, or so I hear ).

I think Celestia's head should be bigger while neck thinner, but this is a picture Celestia made before chapter with Philomena came out ( Twilight sure fall asleep after several public appearances with the nobles, and Celestia could not help herself but to take a picture and treasure it ).

I am sure you all saw this art before as I add it to chapter where filly Twiny tried to drink tea from the cup with the help of her magic ( Though in the story she is far smaller then on this picture, but who I am to complain, it is so adorable ).

Books time:

I personally think that in the book fort chapter, Twiny was far smaller then she is on those pictures, and lifting those giant books on her back without help of her magic was a true challenge.

That's pretty much a grown up Twilight after learning how to levitate herself. She already surfed down the mountain when she tried to protect Spitfire from arrows (and I am sure her hooves really hurt after levitating a giant pegasus while surfing on rock surface), so why not surf on a levitated book?

Book surfing without magic.It cannot be that hard, can it?

One tiny book customized for her size, and one giant book on her back (maybe it is cold and she seek heat under a book, or someone dropped this book on her by surprise as a prank. I am sure Twiny won't mind.

Twiny on top of her books ( though Twiny is far smaller than that ).


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I think this art speak for itself.

Now this is a Twiny on her little size, sleeping on her favourite books, sadly you need to download picture on deviant art to see it in full size.

Bonus chapter - "The Return of Fort Book" continues. After her glorious victory against White Patch, she crowned herself as a mighty book lord.

Not really the best picture, I know. Shy filly Twiny hiding behind a book.

Chapter 2 or 3, Twilight levitated an encyclopaedia and started to read it thoughtfully, sadly for her, the book closed when she reached letter C, trapping and squishing the filly Twiny between it is pages. Though she was lucky, if she reached letter Z and the book closed, the knowledge would overweight her.

Twiny sleeping on rather thin books ( she normally should be far smaller then this, but whatever, she still look cute ).

Next to Celestia’s giant pillow. Books must be Twilight’s favourite sleeping spot.

Now with books out of the way, time for some adorable ones:

Twiny in socks, literally. ( She is smaller in the story, but who cares ).

Filly Twiny a year after defeating fear of her giant mentor in chapter 1, is now lying on her giant pillow ( what act as a bed for her ) and ask Celestia for a belly rub, a plead what the princess was never able to refuse ( but lets be honest, who would ), Twiny even as tiny filly is not afraid that a giant size hoof of her mentor what is bigger then her entire body will hurt her little adorable belly, and luckily for her, Celestia know how to be careful and gentle.

Even as a mare, Twiny still enjoy a good belly rub. Celestia's giant hoof is always very gentle.

Filly Twiny is testing new locations for taking a rest, though so far none was as comfortable as the giant pillow that her mentor gave her to sleep on ( or she is just playing hide and seek ).

Twiny is testing out do a giant pink ribbon will make her look prettier and more cute, and she ask her mentor for opinion.
Celestia: Yes Twilight, you look really adorcable.
Twilight: Thank you... Wait, adorcable... It is a good thing, right, right?


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Twiny as a good faithful tiny student is doing the homework what her mentor tasked her with before leaving to fulfil her royal duties. Twilight decide to do it without help of her magic, because even with her small size, it would still be to easy.


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Twiny tried to finish her homework, but something went wrong. I think a bath is comming.

Cadence take Twilight for a trip around royal gardens, and Twilight quickly start to study every single giant mushroom she encounter ( being tiny actually help her to check every single detail ). Sadly author forgot to draw her cutie mark.

Or Twiny is testing another sleeping spot, or she is trying to find out how well she can perform duty of a light bulb ( most likely so her mentor could read a book after she lowers the sun).

Being tiny caused Twiny a lot of hardship, but it have some pros. For example, this candy cane will last her for weeks.

Speaking about giant sweets, giant cookies are a paradise for every sweets loving filly ( Twiny is far smaller then on this art, so yea, cookies will last for much longer, as for the weight increase, there is no need to worry, Twilight push herself so hard that she will lose her weight in no time ).

A little present she received after her time working for the Wonderbolts’, Cadence is not amused.

And now I proudly present, an art what I chosen as a cover for the sequel:

I hope this art will attract many readers to the sequel once I will upload it.

Now time for Twiny after leaving to Ponyville stuff:

Spoiler alert, Pinkie Pie will put Twiny into a cupcake. When and why, I won't tell, but you cannot have Twiny and Pinkie Pie without Twilight's flavoured cupcake (she was already a flavour of her birthday cake, so it is not a big deal).

Do not worry, Discord is not an evil mean villain or monster, but if he was, this is probably what Twiny would need to face.

See, Discord is a prank master but not a monster. this is more like him.

Discord, stop acting as a big evil villain. Didn't you read the scenario? The bad guys always lose in the end.

Sigh... I warned you, but you didn't listen. All I can say is: "Cry uncle, cry unckle!"

Pinkie was shrunk to Twiny's size and now the tiny unicorn is trying to stop her from drinking a giant cup of coffee (no, just because I found an cute Twiny art, does not mean that I will add what is on this art and what happen on it into the story, so yea, this gallery have just one spoiler).

Twiny hiding from the Giant and Powerful Trixie.


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It seems Trixie won this round. Also, there is a new product on sell. Just today you can buy your own Twiny in a bottle for only 99 bits.


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It is to dangerous to go alone. Take her with you.
Twiny: I may be small, but my magic is strong, can I come with you? Pleaseee!

Now let one of the princesses shrink entire mane 6 and then cookies for everypony.

Twilight and her friends sure have fun on their tiny adventure. This time it is a bath in a cup of tea. The question is, who will drikn the tea once the bath is done?


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Twiny and Dashy have an adventure together.

If tea was not enought, now mane 6 are part of a ice cream desert. Hopefully Spike or Gilda are not nearby or else tiny mane 6 would end up inside of a stomach.

Now this is getting out of hoof. They will be eaten sooner or later at this rate, mark my words.

What did I said. How will the mane 6 get out of this one?


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To every food, you need a drink.

Tiny mane 6 again, though this time now as part of food. Seems they learned their lesson.

When did Trixie joined the tiny team? Or better question, how will they manage to eat this all?

Two tiny mares offer you two diferent drinks, which mare... I mean drink you choose?

Twiny reading a book and tiny Fluttershy joining in, it must be a sleepover.

It was only a matter of time before Twiny was going to be eaten again, and this time by Luna. I quess that makes sense since she already end up in Celestia's stomach, and what can be more fun that exploring a royal belly?
(This is part 2 of 5, go to the source to watch rest of the comic)

Now time for Twinycorn:

Twiny as alicorn in sock.

A giant library in old castle of royal pony sisters, all for Twinycorn to read ( I think I will stay with calling her Twiny, Twinycorn seems a bit odd ).

Twiny alicorn defending her favourite book. Don’t let her size fool you, she have enough magic to beat up a grown up stalion.

Twiny, better remove the shrinking spell from herself, this is not a fair battle.

It seems Twilight is chilling up in the grass while looking upon her giant friends, she must have a lot on her mind to think about after her ascension.

Twiny alicorn is charging a gem. I am sure she have a lot of magic to spare despite her small size.

Cadence shrunk herself to spend time with Twiny, only for Discord to join and have some fun.

Twilight and her friends shrunken together became decoration on a cake. Who needs candles?

Being tiny come with its perks and downsides. In this case being sit upon is a common occurrence. But Twilight is patient and understanding and she can endure it without complaining.

Not so tiny but also not normal size yet. It was just a matter of time before she would rest in his arms after a solid battle.

Twilight have negative influence on other princesses. Now they are all shrinking themselves on daily basics to do the weirdest of stuff. Also, the Royal Cook is going to have a heart attack.

Shrinking spell = giant food, someting Twilight learned from experience and took big advantage off.

Twiny learned to like the idea to explore other princesses’ stomachs while she not mind being eaten alive, but this is going to far.

An activity worth of a tiny alicorn.

After days filled with adventures, Dash decided to ask Rarity to make her a gift for Twilight, a little plushy for Twiny to sleep with as present. Seems Twilight really like it.

And now time for some odd stuff, you have been warned:

Twiny as alicorn vs Sunset Shimmer, it seems that the previous student of Celestia may have a big advantage, or maybe Twiny is trying to challenge herself before returning to her normal size.

Even thought Twiny would accept situation like this as a challenge for her strength and endurance, I can guarantee that Celestia or Luna would never do such thing to her. I hope that I didn't go to far with uploading this art into this gallery ( I had a lot of doubts do I should do it in the first place ).

First chapter of some random tiny Twilight comic.

Twiny and few other tiny ponies, I think the picture speak for itself.

Mayor Mare is trying to eat Twilight before she would fully return to her normal size. Big mistake if you ask me.

With help of shrinking spell, Pinkie’s dream to make cupcakes with her friends in them was finally realised, but no baking and eating them, this would not be fun.

Twiny taking advices from Dash how to be awesome.

I think Twiny tried to shrink herself further and Fluttershy took the opportunity to swallow her (normally she would be to big even for Celestia's throat).
No need to worry, this time she didn't turn herself into a pegasus so she can teleport outside anytime.



I think it is as far as I can go with this gallery, I hope you all enjoyed it, and once again sorry for my grammar.

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Comments ( 19 )

The last three pictures can't be seen.

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It should work for now, but if they will break later, I will need to delete them. After all, they are not from deviant.art, and the side they were uploaded on may have some sort of security preventing from showing it on other side.

If you enjoyed watching this gallery, thumb up this comment.

I think we will have to disagree about Discord

Adorable gallery! :twilightsmile:

Completely agree with Celestias Paladin about Discord :ajbemused:

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Well, Discord for me was always more of a prankster type rather then true villain. He just do what he want for fun and would care less on which side he is on.
Fluttershy showed Discord that there is more then fun and chaos in the world, but there is still need of character development for Discord ( you cannot make Discord care in one day ).

Some writers will make Discord all out villain, some will make him troll, others will make him anty hero, Discord have rather big variety who he may be in a story.

Anyway, what do you mean that you disagree with me on Discord? Mind explain what I said about him you both disagree? Because I got no clue.

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That all he is a loveable trickster. His actions in canon prior to is reformation show that he is far more than a trickster, prankster, or a troll even if he does everything for the lulz. No my friend he is not a trickster, there is a reason why I call him the Chaos Tyrant.

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I do not really get it?

For me Discord is a chaotic neutral character ( especially after his reformation ).

I would never see him as chaotic evil.

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Mind warping, destroying the ecological balance of the world, borderline mind-rape.

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He is a spirit of Chaos and Disharmony, he had to do something.

Anyway his actions were not really lethal and he softened a bit during his reformations.

All I say is that for an evil villain who put world into a chaos, he play rather nicely (most villains would turn world into hell with them on an evil full of swords throne rather then spread chocolate milk all over the place).

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To kill means a victory for Order as it will continue the Great Cycle of Life, Death, and Rebirth.

And he did turn the world into Hell. Shattered the land, disrupted the day-night cycle, changed how ponies thought and acted with a mere snap of his fingers.

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It sounds more as if he was overdrunk from power rather then being evil.

When you can do everything you want, you most likely will do everything you want and do not care about consequences.

Keep in mind that in season 4 with no elements to keep him in check, he is not turning entire world into his playground on his own free will, all because he was given something else to reach too than just fun and chaos.

Absolutely adorable little unicorn.

This is just... I ALREADY HAVE A THING FOR TWILIGHT, NOW YOU JUST MADE IT WORSE!

Sorry

... Do I even have to say anything...

Well yes. I was really unsure do I should add this one in the first place. But while the content of this art is a big harsh, I could not deny it for the quality.

1712232 Unfortunately they still seem to be unavailable, and my system won't allow access to the source links.

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I see. Though I will leave the source links, maybe others can access it.

1712828 His "reformation" should be taken with a grain of salt, as It only occurred after the fanbase woobified him for a full season, prior to that he was rather sadistic and cruel. Look how much he ENJOYED breaking the Mane Six emotionally.

I don’t buy the “He didn’t kill, therefore he’s not evil.” Argument, killing isn’t the only act of evil one can commit, and for someone as manipulative as he is, killing would be boring. More fun to leave them alive to mess with them.

Besides, this is technically a children’s show, the writers aren’t going to use killing as the first resort as prove someone is evil

Besides, the all-loving, benevolent Celestia hates him, which should be evidence enough he can’t be trusted.

SO KYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!

something fundamentally messed up in my mind when I saw that last one

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