PLANS FOR CANTERLOT NIGHTS · 7:47pm May 7th, 2012
I'm thinking of editing, reorganizing, and possibly retitling this story in preparation for submitting it to EquestriaDaily. Right now, my thoughts are:
- fix errors
- new story title
- change Chapter 1 to "Study Night"
- remove "Creation Story"
More on that: I think the second chapter is too much of a digression and might have too much headcanon to get a good reception. Don't get me wrong, I like it, but it doesn't have the same theme as the other parts. The other parts focus on Twilight's history and character development, but this one is mainly on Celestia.
The problem is, I don't want to delete it from here. But according to the rules, I might not be able to resubmit it as another story (I don't even think it's long enough). Any ideas?
I'll need some feedback on this! Do you have any title ideas or suggestions? Thanks in advance for advice.
Personally, I liked chapter two, and felt that it fit very well with the others. I think you should leave it in, but it's your story, so you should do what you want with it.
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You think so?
I might add to it and repost it as another chapter later. If you want to see it, it's still on the fanfic.net version of this (my page is in my profile)
Thanks!