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  • 541 weeks
    NEW STORY!

    Today, I got inspired, so I made another story, I hope you like it, I think it has a better start than Marevengers, so maybe people will like it, and you know don't forget to favorite it and like, and if you don't like it, I invite you to give constructive criticism, thanks everypony

    0 comments · 316 views
  • 543 weeks
    Breaking Bad or X-Mares

    I decided to make a second story, but not sure what to do, a Breaking Bad crossover, a X-Mares crossover, or a totally new love story, so you should be the ones to decide what's it gonna be, vote BB, XM, or LT down in the comment section

    2 comments · 358 views
  • 543 weeks
    I'm remaking the first chapter of my story

    So as everypony knows, the return of nightmare moon had a lot of flaws and, if someday my stories become famous, I'm going to get a lot of criticism, so when I finish it, if you are so kind, read it and tell if it is an improvement, and if I could improve even more, just tell me

    0 comments · 314 views
  • 543 weeks
    Happy New Year!!!

    Happy New Year to everypony, hope you enjoy, and to everyone that has been nice to me, as a gift, tomorrow or Thursday, I'm posting my next chapter, and it's going to be a little less rushed, it's also going to be longer, following all suggestions, so I'm macking sure it's packed with action, so yeah, if it wasn't for everyone that helped me, my story would really suck, and well, Happy Holidays!!!

    1 comments · 266 views
  • 544 weeks
    I'm just a newbie

    Okay guys, I know my stories are full of flaws, but I'm just a beginner, and I need all the help you can give me, but don't be big meanies like Gilda, okey dokey lokey?

    5 comments · 391 views
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I'm just a newbie · 1:40am Dec 29th, 2013

Okay guys, I know my stories are full of flaws, but I'm just a beginner, and I need all the help you can give me, but don't be big meanies like Gilda, okey dokey lokey?

Comments ( 5 )

I was a newbie once. And the only remnant of that newbness is Flutter Island.exe.

Hey, with writing comes improvement. Keep writing and you'll get there. (there=where you want to be as an author) :twilightsmile:

Perfectly understandable. It's always nice to have constructive criticism, rather than some lame comment like "Your stories suck LOL! Die loser!"

You're off to a good start, and it will only get better from there. :twilightsmile:

Awesome, thanks for all the support, and I was out of town for three days, so I haven't had a chance to write, but for being such nice dudes, I'll tell you the next chapter's name, it's: And into the cave, also, after finishing the story, and if you want it, I'll make an X-Mares story, and after that, if people like that one, Marevengers vs X-Mares

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