For those of you Lazarus readers who want to rip my head off. (My personal apology/good news) · 8:52pm Dec 17th, 2013
Please read!
I'll say this, I've figured out a way to revive our story (I'm saying our because your brilliant suggestions and ideas) but before I say anything I would actually want to deeply apologize to all of you for how I've been acting. I don't know if you guys felt that before, but do you know that feeling when you write or even draw/create whatever it is. And you feel proud of yourself, so much that you're willing to show it to your friends, hell maybe even a few strangers.
Only to have it criticized, now I'm not saying criticized as in a helpful way (well all criticism is helpful) but the way that makes it seem like shit. I mean really, really bad shit. The kind that you can't even be in your bathroom for a few hours (I hate that shit) and it makes you feel down. Well that's how I felt and I was in denial, "No it's fine, it's perfectly normal." or "Think about it, it makes sense–"
No, NO!
You guys shouldn't have to think about it, it should be right there in plain text explaining what is happening! I'll still say that the scene had potential and the character choices were okay (not perfect) but okay. And I'll try my best to re-write it.
But that is not the thing that will revive the story.
1st- I'll take out the gore! (Except for the parts that are already written.)
2nd- I'll begin character development for the humans! (Should have done it in the beginning but at some point I'll go back and fix it)
3rd- And finally I'll explain why Luna and Celestia were acting incompetent (It was actually done intentionally, scroll down to see it if you want to.)
Chop chop. Don't got all week. The big boys expect the next chapter to be out five millennia ago.
/sarcasm/
My god those spoilers
What spoilers, I only got a picture. o-o
Don't worry everything is shit, what's important is that your shot is less stinky the the next guy over.
I genuinely enjoyed the story as it was, so don't change it on my account.
But I actually liked the gore... Maybe you could keep it please? Or if not maybe still have violence?
1619588 Of course I'm keeping the violence in, if I didn't I'd have to cut out the mech.
Well, I for one am loving how interactive this story is. It's almost like an advanced, audience driven choose your own adventure game.
And I guess fimfiction readers really want to read about the socio political ramifications of meeting with different cultures from various standpoints... Or maybe we just like vicariously playing "who has the biggest dick".
No...gore...MY ONLY WEAKNESS
1619589 Sigh... it's better than nothing... damn pussies not being able to handle a little bit of gore...
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You have solved the worlds biggest mystery.
I really want to be mad at you for pulling something like that in the last chapter, I really do, but every time I see your avatar my anger disappears.
1690174 That's my primary defense to be honest. Nobody can be mad at someone who has an image of a happy Bob Ross.