The Life of Zephyr Star · 12:48pm Dec 15th, 2013
i'm going to re-write parts of the first chapter add some things and overall just give it a good hard review for those of you that have read it i want you to write down in the comments on either the story or this blog post. go on give me a good hard review don't hold back on me as i want this to be the best it possibly can
I already gave you a review.
1609740 i know but i want a review from everyone who read the story you know get feedback and everything
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I know. I like it so far and also want to see what everyone else has to say.
Off topic but I just realized to my embarrassment, in the summary of 'A song a day', I wrote Applejack as Appledash. I had no idea I had done that.
It's fixed now but I'm surprised no one had said anything.
1609797 I vaguely remember reading appledash but it must've registered as applejack to me at the time sorry bout that
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It was just funny. I hope no one got deterred by it or expected that shipping.
1609819 probably not
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How's your writing going? I'm working on a birthday party for Discord.
1609824 I'm gonna wait till I get feedback before I continue
1609841
If you don't get it soon, I say you message your followers. Not every one takes the time to actually read a blog post.
I've decided to do something different by writing more about Grey and Discord/Pinkie's relationship. Also, expand the world they're in with my sort of 'head cannons'/inclusions of things.
1609844 that's what I was thinking of doing
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The messaging part or the expanding part?
1609865 expanding
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Yeah, I'm thinking I might either make a whole chapter about the world I have them in or simply a short story. It's important for the readers to know what you have happen and who you have included in the story. I'm not that good at slowly putting in explanations here and there. I think that's what my big problem is in With extra frosting. I'm having problems giving back story.
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I'm really looking forward to your back story
I hope you have a fun time getting into it.
1609886 I have to agree though not in a mean way I would suggest giving a back story to why pinkie treats grey as a beat friend on par with the other mane six and just basic stuff like that... That sounds so hypocritical coming from me
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Not really. You've at least touched on it and on your way to explaining.
To be honest, I had planned to explain it on my tumblr account but I have serious problems getting into it. My ask Grey Faerie is near empty cause of my problem roleplaying as her. Sounds odd but understandable, it's hard to roleplay when you've got no one to act with or a even a situation/story to get into.
1609915 we'll I can probably help with role playing thing since I'm in drama and I need practice for stuff like this anyway so I could help if you need it
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Awesome, great, I have no idea how to even start.
But I'll probably make a blog post for that later. This one should be about your story.
Hey, what time is it for you?
1609947 1:45 am
Also I might have an idea for how grey met pinkie
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I do have a story about how they met but I would love to hear what you think would be a good one.
1609959 During party of one when pinkie thought that her friends had abandoned her she went for a walk to contemplate everything as she was walking she bumped into grey faerie and they begin talking grey after suggesting that she may be misunderstanding things pinkie gets angry and tells her off before storming off to go make her own 'friends' after it is solved pinkie then goes and finds grey and apologies and from there on they slowly begin to become friends