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Puzzle Piece


"Every one of us is one more piece in this puzzle called life. Now if only I could get a glance at the box to find my place...."

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  • 259 weeks
    "Innocent" Combat Report

    These are the official numbers from each battle in Innocent. More battles will be added as they occur. Spoilers below: Be warned!


    Battle of Greenspring Glade (Chapter 12):
    Total Starting Troops:

    • Equestrian Forces: 372

      1. 370 Royal Guard: 50 Lances, 50 Mages, 150 Fliers, 120 Swords

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  • 354 weeks
    Inquiry

    I'd like a bit of feedback on some technical issues surrounding Innocent.

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  • 407 weeks
    On With The Show

    After the diversion that was PonySide, my other story, Innocent, will begin updating again. The first order of business will be the addition of prefacing micro-chapters for each Act, which will attempt to separate them more distinctly. Please let me know if they help or hinder the transitions, as this is a bit of an experiment. There have also been some moderate edits to the first

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  • 458 weeks
    Change of Pace

    I am on the verge of posting the final chapter of Act II for Innocent. With that milestone, I am going to take a short break from that story. I would like to try one of the other ideas I've had but I'll only be doing one before getting back into Innocent. Below are some preliminary descriptions of the ideas I'm looking at. I'd rather do the one that will be enjoyed by those watching than just

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  • 477 weeks
    This is why we rehearse...

    As stated in the Author's notes of Chapter 7: Under Moon and Star, Part 1, I had been trying to fit everything in that I had planned. As it turns out, I did miss a rather important detail. I've updated the ending portion (just after they return to Ponyville) to include the missing part. It is recommended that readers go back and make sure they catch the change. It has a lot to

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Dec
4th
2013

The Tags · 8:03pm Dec 4th, 2013

I've decided that I'm lowering the tag on Innocent from Mature to Teen. This is for three reasons. First, I believe I may have over estimated the content I'm posting and feel that a teen audience can handle it. Second, I have noticed that many other stories around this site have similar, and in some cases, worse displays of gore and violence than mine will. The third, I will admit, is a little selfish but it is a contributing factor nonetheless. The Mature tag might be depriving me of a significant number of views. This makes me unhappy, and that's counter-productive to the writing process and its intended result. By lowering the tag, I intend to pull in more views, make my story consistent with the ratings of its peers, and acknowledge that not only was my estimate of my story's content overshot but also that the maturity level of the readers on this site is better than I had originally given credit.

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