Max Cake - Part 2 and Beyond

Well for anyone watching these, a reminder that Max Cake Part II is now out there to be read. I'm quite grateful for everyone who has taken an interest in it. If I get part III finished, this shall be my first truly finished fanfic for anything!

Okay, half not true, and half true. It did take me five minutes to retool one of my favorite fanfics into this devilishly delightful parody:

Twilight Sparkle waited. The lights above her blinked and sparked out of the air. There were changlings in the base. She didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. Her warnings to Prinses Selestia were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Twilight was a unicorn for fourteen years. When she was young she watched the magicks and she said to dad "I want to be magick daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY CHANGLINGS"
There was a time when she believed him. Then as she got oldered she stopped. But now in the banequit weding hall of the Kanterlot she knew there were changlings.
"This is Selestia" the Prinses crackered. "You must fight the changlings!"
So Twilight gotted her Pinky canun and blew up the rocks.
"SHE GOING TO KILL US" said the changlings
"I will shoot at her" said the Kween and she fired the magick bolts. Twilight pinkied at her and tried to blew her up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to magick.
"No! I must kill the changlings" she shouted
The Prinses said "No, Twilight. You are the changlings"
And then Twilight was a changeling.

(Original story credits go to Peter Chimera and his story "Repercussions of Evil")

Eeeeeeeeeeeee-nuff of that bull then. However, as I said before, I wanted to go back through Part one of Mr Cake's bits of horror and go through a re-edit process on the first part, which means that for the time being, I'll be back again on part I rather than working on Part III, for now. So just keepin' you all updated, and thanks again for the support!