Preview 'My Creation' · 6:01am Apr 29th, 2012
My Creation
Story By: Thunder Seethe
Special Thanks: AppleMLP < Editor
I moved toward my desk feeling every sense of new pain. Now that I have experienced life and love, I have forgotten the old feeling of loneliness, and hate. What she had brought to my life was a miracle. She allowed me to talk, she taught me how to live, she showed me how to love. She... erased the memories. Now... I relive them. I know I've said in the past that there really is no such thing as forgetting, and that it's always locked up somewhere in your brain. They're in fragments. It's up to you to put them together. I just believe that it's too late for that. There's too many hidden pieces. I know she existed. I know what we did. I know what happened. I know what I did...
I don't know where she is. I don't know if she's okay. I don't know if I'm okay. My life, is based off of the shear will of assuming.
There is no end to this. I'll never remember.
I removed my jacket, and withdrew the gun from under the desk.
Dear Misty,
In my new home, gun at my head.
I can't see her, she can't see me,
Without her, I may as well be dead,
these memories won't leave me be,
I may as well be left with the dying sea.
I can't go on without you,
I can only hope you're fine,
needless to say, I must bid adieu,
may your life be as divine,
and may your life shine to your hearts content.
Your Father - I love you Misty.
I pulled the gun out of my old desk. I could still hear her joyful laughter. I could still hear her calling out for me. I only wish... that she was beside me. I could still hear her little hoof steps running up the stairs. That one last thought, can bring any man peace.
I raised the gun to my head... "If I can't see you now... maybe later, I can see you in the mist."
Hopefully at least one of you viewed this, if not then well... it's fine. I'm glad I wrote this. I'm currently up to 6,700 words on this story, and barely cut through the middle. It will be sad, and if you like sad stories, then be sure to check it out! I'll be honest, I didn't work on it for a few days. Now for A Second Too Late I promise I will make another update hopefully midweek, if not then two chapters on Saturday next week. This story My Creation will be released sometime during the summer. Hopefully sooner!
Thanks for reading my stories. It means a lot to me!
It certainly looks well written and I'm looking forward to reading this story, but I can't help finding the idea of a gun in equestria awkward.
The title makes me quite curious (made me think of Frankenstein)
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Thanks, this will also be one of those stories edited, proofread, and redone multiple times. I hope it does just as well as my other story. This will be a major project, and I'm glad you enjoyed the preview!
One more thing, this isn't going to take place in Equestria.
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Yeah, that explains the gun
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Glad you're into the story though, and you actually took the time to look here! Means a lot you know!