I know it's hard when people keep commenting on it, but you should never give up! I know this sounds cliche, but honestly, the more you write the better you'll get. And if you want, I'd be happy to review your chapter and help you with the grammar.
Just don't give up, when people point out a mistake, it's usually because they want to help, not because they're trying to be mean.
I would of liked it if you finished your story.
I know it's hard when people keep commenting on it, but you should never give up! I know this sounds cliche, but honestly, the more you write the better you'll get. And if you want, I'd be happy to review your chapter and help you with the grammar.
Just don't give up, when people point out a mistake, it's usually because they want to help, not because they're trying to be mean.
Take these words into consideration.