Ok, so I kinda fell off the face of the planet again and was able to macgyver a way back using a wet network cable, a bottle of nitroglycerine, an old tire, and a rocket pack frame. Then I spent two weeks trying to pull my head out of the bedrock. Anyways, here's a double dose of Game of Fate.
Done, I think I got all the glitches out of it. Please poke me if you notice something off kilter. Now if you excuse me, I have to have round 42 with this worthless modem. Oh, and I'm-a puttin' chapter 5 up soon.
Finally got to the edit function without any 502's stopping me, anyways, I poked prodded and examined, and I think that CH 1 is a bit better (albeit longer). Eventually Ch 2 will update.