Night of the Shy: Minor edits to chapters 3 and 4 made · 5:06pm Sep 27th, 2011
To better tie the story to the upcoming revelation in Chapter 5 of Night of the Shy, I have made these minor changes to previous chapters:
Chapter 3: Slightly altered one line of dialogue, and added an extra line of dialogue.
Chapter 4: Slightly altered one line of dialogue.
Very minor changes, but enough for what I need.