Making tracks part 3 is on the way. · 4:53am Dec 8th, 2011
it's been written out with some revisions by myself. but i'm not the best at grammer and spelling so a friend has been editing for me. however he's been missing for a week or so, so that's why the next part isn't submitted yet. but once it comes out comment if you'd like let me know what you think, it'll help me shape things better.
Chapter 4 is already being written and we see the some of the mane cast appear as well. I'd like to say that orignally i wasn't going to include the mane six because i don't want to fall in that trap of "your oc knows all the mane six?" but it seems unavoidable as well, so my new plan is to make them scarce. only seen now and again, as they are not the main plot of the story.
one more thing. *i'll be posting this snippet into chapter 3 as well* *AUTHORS NOTES* It concerns Caramel and macintosh as a couple. now alot of people say they are related and this and that, but it's all personal opinion honestly. For me, they are not related and there for nothing odd is going on. Caramel for one, doesn't have an apple based cutie mark like all the ponies in the apple family do. Two even if he was a relative, i imagine he'd have to be a fruit related one for that to be a legit anwser. IE: Uncle and aunt orange.
The last point is pretty simple, we all have our thoughts on which pony is with who and what not. For myself, that's Caramel x Macintosh and that's what i like. i apologize if it's not your head fannon and all that.