Apr
18th
2012
Minor changes made to The Alicorn; Night of the Shy Revamp Chap. 7 samples! · 4:28pm Apr 18th, 2012
I've made a few minor changes to my new oneshot, The Alicorn. Toned down a line near the end (not really, but I changed it so it's left to the imagination.) I also modified how another certain sequence near the end plays out, because I re-read it and realized Celestia's actions didn't really fit her character, even with the slight liberties the story takes with it. I think the changes work for the better, honestly.
And onto Night of the Shy (Revamp) Chap. 7! My outline is finished, and I've begun writing! Here's a sample:
1.) "No."
"...Pinkie?"
"No parties. Not now..."
2.) The sand shifted and moved - far more than normal. Rarity paused, her front hoof up in mid-stride. "What, pray tell, was that?"
