Moving is almost done

Hey guys, I am a bit surprised myself that I can still access the internet. Anyway, after a few tips from some experts in writing I found out some flaws in my style, and I am going to correct them before furthering the story [yeah, another extension] but I am still a rookie. A rookie trying a long story for his first project. Although, you ought to see what I have coming up my sleeve soon...Let's just say I don't think some things should be cancelled and not have a legacy. Well, to those that have followed me, I thank you for the follows [not sure how I earned them when my mistakes were pointed out] and I will get back to you soon.