Changes to Joke's on You

To anypony that might be interested, I've put up a new version of the first chapter of 'Joke's on You' as well as a second chapter. The edits are nothing big, just a few minor tweaks and hopefully some spelling, grammar, and plot improvements. I'm still struggling a bit with grammar issues and self editing can only get me so far. I'm trying to get a proofreader over on ponychan but they can be super busy, so if anypony with an eye for grammar wants the job I'd be extremely grateful for the help. If not, I'll simply have to wait patiently for one of the great grammar gurus of /fic/ to free up some time.

I'm going to try to get these chapters out a little faster. Now that tax season is over I'll have a little more time for writing, and I've experienced an increase of motivation lately. Of course, I do have another story that I need to get an update out for before I'll feel comfortable updating 'Joke's on You' again. I need to try to fight back the urge to start more multi-chapter fics while I've already got irons in the fire, but when the muse strikes it's usually best to go with it.