New story: I present to you "Observations" · 2:26am Oct 7th, 2013
The trains whistled pierced the cool evening air, as the train slowed as it approached the crystallized magic dome that covered the city. The tundra that surrounded the city in an endless winter began to falter and gave way to bright grassy fields, filled with all species of flowers and birds, mingling in a peaceful bliss.
It had been three months since Twilight had entered the portal to that strange new world, one filled with even stranger yet creatures, ones that walked on two hooves and had ape like appendages. Each one standing at least two pony heights tall, from hoof to mane. These creatures seemed rather unintelligent at the time, but strangely enough they had items that even the greatest of magicians would be dumbfounded by their power. These magical devises that she had observed being called "k-ump-u-ter-s" held vast, seemingly endless waves of information, and the creatures used them, and talked as if they were owned by all, surly these machines must be highly advanced, and difficult to manufacture.
Another piece of magical machines, was the one known as "karrs", the pony less carriages made of metal, that roamed the streets in the hundreds and would transport everypony to and from the school in which, she had attended and lived in for that frighting adventure.
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I know I've disappeared and it looked like I abandoned you all that have read My first story *shiver*, but between a random move that got thrown my way and me wanting to get better,( you know its realty bad when the author admits it) I felt like I failed at my first story, not even five chapters in at that! and i felt like i could do much better than I had been doing so. Anyways i'm back and hopefully much much better. So tell me what you think so far and keep your eyes out for "Observations". Stay pony my friends.
STOP MOVING SAM!
lol
1403649 so what ya up to blue?
Sam just wondering when will the new story be out?
About a week or two i want to get a few chapters done first>>1407755
1403658 Nothin' much getting inspired to write stories, writing 1 paragraph or more ,stopping, thinking of the whole story and getting so exited to write the sequel i neglect the original. Ya know business as usual.
1457396 i know how you feel man, it seems like your mind always wants the sequel first.
Hey, guess what im a S.T.A.L.K.E.R
1542921 yes you are leif my boy... yes you are.