As I was going through the first chapter, I noticed too many errors where instead of saying Amethyst, I put Colgate. I have no idea how that happened, unless I replaced Amethyst with Colgate and forgot to make a lot of changes. Now, that's not reason enough to unrelease a story. Truth it, I kinda hate the subplot of "Rarity spied on two ponies and told them."
Eeyup. In case you haven't noticed, chapter 2 is taking a long time to come out. That's due to being delayed twice. The first time was when I had written half of it while I was waiting for chapter 1 to e proofread. There was a part in the story I didn't like, so I would have to write a sizeable chunk and I wasn't looking forward to that, so I put it off for awhile.
I made this OC during valentines day, but was unable to post her on a certain website, then when I joined this site I was too scared. I was scared that people will call me a noob and get mad at me, but my new friend Bronysinc convinced me that no one would get mad. I hope you enjoy her--Ruby--as much as I love her. If enough people want I will post a profile about her twin brother, Cast.
Powers: The only spells they can do is create love, so basic spells such as levitation is impossible to them. They shoot hearts from their horns. It’s like the ‘Want it, Need it’ spell, expect the power doesn’t make ponies fall in love, but allows them to.