Fic review

Hello everypony this is a simple review of the "The Unpredictable Magic Of Love" written by Overkill

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105829/the-unpredictable-magic-of-love

If you didnt realize yet I am a Big Spike fan, and my favorite fic are the ones that twilight and him are together, and this one just became one of them.

premise

7 years had passed since the last great catastrophe on Equestria as the Elements of Harmony now called with a great tittle "Guardians of Harmony" had gone on their on different ways as twilight reflects on her life romantic life after thinking about the other holders of the elements started new relationships.

At the same time Spike is now working outside the library, trying to help Celestia to form a new alliance with the Dragons Kingdom.

After a series of events Twilight finds that the love of her life is closer than she ever though as Spike is reveal to have similar feelings for the Unicorn.

Review

The story is well presented as each chapter contributes something to the whole deal of the love between our main two characters, even though we have some questionable events. We have a small part if the story dealing with some inter-species hatred which leads to an interesting
event at at moments, characters AND elements that are presented then forgotten and some others just feel out of place it feels forced but luckily it focus again on the lovers.

The Dragons are an interesting part of the story and the kingdom looks like something that can be explore more in detail, there are moments that suck you completely of the story and Im not going to lie I was annoyed by them.

Also there is quite a few mistakes that need to be fixed.

And I feel like the Epilogue was unnecessary long specially since it sounds like a really nice story that could be told APART from this one.

overall

Great story when it focus on the lovers, great drama, and the ending (before the epilogue) was really heart breaking.

I give this a 7/10 with a must read