Success at last

Finally got my story Colt P.I. uploaded after my internet failed and I got it rejected several times, but thanks to the admins for being really helpful (esp. Meeester for helping me with some troubles I was having). If you haven't already, maybe you could go and read it? I hope you enjoy(ed) it! If you have done and for some reason are reading this, thanks a lot, and feel free to comment/message me or Danthefish your thoughts on how we did/can improve!