A Cry For Help: Chapter 2

I'm currently writing Chapter 2, as you can see by my writing status box on my profile page. I plan on going for a longer chapter this time around though, around 5000 words at least. Because of this, I'm afraid that the quality of the story may begin to diminish. So, to the point. I'm looking for pre readers. I don't care if you're not experienced, but I just want someone to give me their opinion on the chapter before I publish it.

I want this story to be the best that it can be, so I'm trying to take every step possible to make sure each chapter is perfect. If you're interested in becoming a pre reader, please leave a comment below. You will be thanked in the author's notes at the end of the chapter, of course