Probable penultimate chapter of A Gentleman's Journal etc.

OK, the next chapter will probably be at the very least the penultimate chapter of "A Gentleman's Journal" and I want to thank everyone who has stayed with me in spite of everything.

I'd also like to ask for some feedback.

Some have expressed their hope that Celestia and Edmund become romantically involved and for her to join the family.

What do you guys think? Is it too Gary Stu for Ed to get Celestia?

As to the questions about who the voice that taunted Ed is I have to say that it is NOT a cannon character. If you know your Tolkien it should be clear who is whom.
The nameless "God" = Sauron
Sombra = a mix of Isildur and the witch king of Angmar

And the voice of the nameless one is of course the same as the mouth of Sauron from LOTR. He serves as the spokesman/emissary of his master.

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What do you guys think? Is it too Gary Stu for Ed to get Celestia?

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Nope, I think it will make sense they end up together, you establish a very good base of they like each other

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So the next chapter will come up soon?