Dissonance 1.1 · 11:17pm Aug 5th, 2013
Essentially how Rainbow will look and feel throughout the entirety of Dissonance, starting with Chapter Two, along with the obligatory presence of Derpy
Because it wouldn't be Dissonance without a rewrite. This one in particular was done to adjust for an upcoming re-submission to Equestria Daily—and before you criticize, you ought to read it. If you do not see substantial improvement from the first version, then I'll be willing to listen to a bit of 'ermahgash eqd so unfer y u lisen 2 dem.' I, for one, trust their judgement—even if they've been known to be a little pretentious in the way they communicate it. At the very least, it improves the quality of my work.
The entirety of the story won't be taken in a new direction, but I found I have rediscovered a large portion of my flair as an author, which will shine in the new way I execute the tests. One thing's for certain: There will be no mere sitting around this time. The tension is ripe for the picking. I did author a chapter of Silent Ponyville, after all. I'd like to think I rather know how to strip the protagonists of most all their strength and courage.
Cheers all. Let me know what you think in comments of Dissonance.
Edit: Picture's fixed! Must have been too big the first time around.
Yes, and we all remember how that chapter went down, don't we?
That said, listen to this guy. I had some issues going in, but this latest rewrite is turning out really good. The slow road leads to the greatest prize.
Also, picture's derped, but that might just be me.
The pic link is broken.
MB, your picture derped. o3o