At least I learned something!

In hindsight, I'm really starting to notice my own flawed writing. More specifically, the show and tell aspect I've seen mention of. I definitely have a weakness for telling and not showing, and I think it stems from a hurried state of mind. I need to work on that. >.> Going forward, I'm trying to improve the behavior and take more time in my work. We'll see if I can actually show any improvement, but to that end, I've been appreciative to all who have seen my work thusfar. Good or bad, it's nice to just have it read for once, such being the only reason to write in the first place! Thank you all for that. ^_^