This was unexpected. P.S. THANK YOU ALL!!! (More to come) · 6:51pm Jul 26th, 2013
"Al get your butt over here!"
"What is it, Ike?"
*Ike points at screen*
"Is that the feature box... IS THAT MY STORY!"
"I think you mean my story, but, yes, it is."
"It m-m-made it t-to the f-feature boaahhhh-" *Crash!*
"Al... Al?" *Slaps him once. It is ineffective*"Heh, um. Well, if Al were conscious at the moment I'm sure he would be thanking everyone for their support."
"Feature..."
"Right. I'm going to find some smelling salts, and I'll have him back to working in no time. Lastly, I would like to thank everyone for reading, and all I can say is the future is going to be a fun ride."
"Mula ha gah..."
*Sighs* "The only thing that frightens me is that we have to have this lummox take us there."
That is what happens when you write a brilliant story opening. Keep it up and the praise will only increase.
PS: I'm watching you