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The Psychopath


My very first (self-published) book can be found on Amazon Kindle for 5 or 12 paperback! If you love dragons, give it a look! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CSM7QQ2M

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Jul
24th
2013

WORD OF WARNING! THIS IS EXTREMELY IMPORTANT! EQUINOX KINGDOM! (I will be updating this every now and then) · 9:18pm Jul 24th, 2013

I'm leaving the site....



















But seriously, this is very important. Unfortunately for you guys waiting for Steamlord and "a heart to thou", I'll have to postpone those, because I'm going to create a story with characters from the Equinox Kingdom.
(The Equinox kingdom is from Riygan)

That guy hasn't been on for 24 weeks, so I can't talk to him about the universe, so I can only base myself off of the brief character descriptions he's given with the drawings. The Equinox Kingdom is a dark counterpart to Equestria, where Applejack has been revived as a zombie and Fluttershy has become symbiotically fused to a variant of parasprite. You think this is cute? Here's Spiderlock:
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And here's something I found that seems to fit Equinox very well. Better suggestions are appreciated that isn't "music box" music.
Now, obviously, the story. I don't know what to say. I'm busy meshing up as much as I can of their stories:

Gorgonies
Black Entity (which refers to a war) (secondary)
The Wonder Bolts
Vinyl Scratch. (Secondary)
The Pie sisters
Braeburn (I DON4T UNDERSTAND SPANISH! HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGH!)
Princess Celestia
Twalot Spurkle :3
Fluttershy
Pinkie Pie
Rainbow Dash
Applejack (You know you'd love to lick her maggots. :D)
Rarity
Discord
The Counter-parts to the Elements of Harmony.
Spike
Princess Luna
Silly me. I forgot Lyra and Bon-Bon.
Scootaloo

(These ones are my creation)
Princess Cadance = Princess Lolung (or Lovelust). Her hooves have turned into curved hook-bones permanently dripping with the blood coming from the torn tendrils of her "ankles". He heart is outside of her body and pulsates irregularly. Her mane and tail have veins that intertwine with the fur and are fully functional, but tear out of small holes in her rear. Her eyes, now black, have pupils that are irregular in size but red, kinda looking like shriveled grapes, but not yet raisins. Her coat is a very dark pink, and her mane and tail have the color of blood plasma. Her mouth is also half-torn, revealing sharded blood-clots to be her new teeth. (sharded blood-clots meaning they're sharp, like shark teeth).

Princess Lolung: After Queen Blackhole spread her miasma, Lolung has become a dark individual who frequently looks for ponies and other creatures in order to eat their hearts. Sometimes, she'll solve a love conflict, but it usually involves permanent solutions, such as what she did with Bon-Bon and Lyra. She rules the Carbon Kingdom, where all the ponies there have pretty much become deranged versions of crystal ponies, hanging corpses everywher as decorations and going into cannibalism or other things that sate their "love" and desires.

Shining Armor= Tarnished Shield

His coat is of a faint gray, but he has rust marks everywhere, and his tail is so "rusted" that the fur doesn't even move, and the bone can be seen protruding from the end. His eyes have decayed to the point where he no longer has them, and, instead, posesses Coagulated blood in his eyes sockets. His mouth is also pretty much rusted to death as well.

He is the trusted companion if Princess Lolung and frequently hunts for her "food" while still loving her greatly and deeply. They both frequently play with the hearts of their captured ponies before Lolung eats them, laughing and smiling all the way. Isn't that cute?


Zecora=Zala
As Zecora is a master of the more unnknown, somewhat "darker" in some regards, magic, Zala is purely into voodoo magic, and her's works. This Zecora's mane and tail are made out of wood, and her lower jaw is like hat of a puppet's. Strings coming from the nerves in her legs and neck all pull out to become a single nerve cluster in her back which takes the shape of a puppet handle. Her mane and tail look like they were painted with crayons, though.

She frequently gets visitors who want somepony to be punished, but they have to strike a deal first. If the deal is not accomplished, then they are taken by Zala and turned into fleshy puppets with a similar appearance to her's. The only difference is that they cannot move. No. They line her walls and their eyes bulge out with pain and panic as they look around the room, screaming with a muffled cry. She has many of them, and theey will never die as the zebra mixes up her potions in the smothered, greenish-black cauldron at the center of her dark abode.

Her powers come from spirits inhabiting her body and has full access to their powers as long as the needs are met. Luckily, the deals she makes are enough to serve these purposes, but bad things arise when even one of the ponies fulfills their end of the deal.


Derpy Hooves= Dharma

Covered in a silver armor fused to her skin, Dharma can only remove the hoof plates and facial mask, showing her to be more metal than pony. Tufts of fur pass through the armor, as does blood. She has been fused to this armor made from pure silver as she has the ability to destabilize objects when she touches them with any part of her body. Sometimes they explode, sometimes they melt in a pile of gooey flesh and blood. DON'T touch her.


King Sombra=Crimsear (His backstory is from Epic Brony for Life)

His eyes have a burning outline. His mane and tail are the same, but made of ash, and when he opens his mouth, it's like brimstone. A bright, burning light from the back of his throat while little explosions and expulsions of rock and ash are cast from his mouth. His body has this as well, with little orangy cracks seen here and there.

Although his body has been transformed and his mind twist to new lows, Crimsear is still obsessed with the power the crystals in the Crystal Empire. However, in addition to transforming all the crystal ponies to carbon ponies, Queen Blackhole's miasma also turned all the crystals into twisted spires of carbon/coal. Seeking to reverse the miasma's effect, Crimsear spends every waking moment prowling the streets of the Carbon Kingdom (Equinox version of Crystal Empire), capturing any carbon ponies unfortunate enough to cross his path. Back at his hidden lair below the Carbon Citadel (Equinox version of Crystal Castle), the screams of hundreds of captured carbons ponies can be heard as Crimsear seals them away, locking them in hanging cages suspended over a roaring flame. For countless hours they are left to burn, and then, be they dead or alive, Crimsear tosses them into a near bottomless pit, in the hopes that the cumulative heat and pressure will give birth to the crystals he so desperately craves.







If ANY of you knew him before, then do you know of any story elements Riygan omitted? I want to make this as accurate as possible to his ideas.

The story itself will base itself off the Equinox-Gorgony war, then branch off from there, telling of the origin of the Equinox-6 and how they became as they are, then I'll go to the plot developpment.

And yes, Samaru. Feel the wrath of the notifications. :)

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Comments ( 23 )

I call 'LE TROLLE', and wish you luck upon your adventures.
(Please don't look at me)

ISA

shit disurbing!
i clicked the link!
hated it.

1233372 Anything you'd prefer instead?

It really fits the Insanity world. I wonder what would be the alternate version of the Psychopath in this world :pinkiecrazy:?

1233420 I know. He really nailed down the idea I had, but I discovered this after I made the ideas (WAY after), and I thought they would all be perfect for Insanity. Unfortunately for you, the opposite of Psycho would be in the World of Insanity, which would bring up too many conflicts and contradicitions within the two worlds. That's why there's only one version to each herald in any given universe or dimension.

1233426 So in another universe, there could be the alternate version of the Psychopath, but they can't exist in the same? It make sense actually... which is kinda worrying. His version of Discord is really badass, too bad he didn't do Sombra, since he is the only actually evil pony in the show, I wonder what his counterpart would look like.

1233440 He would be pink and quite stunning with his attire. It's not gay. It's being fabulous.:pinkiecrazy:

1233444 Is it weird that I think that he would actually look more terrifying than all the Equinox Girls together? Even more if you add him sparkling glitters, you can never be wrong with glitters.

1233459 Saw them, they are actually the only ones who managed to make me feel scared :unsuresweetie: Mainly because they are in love, and my mind is a little too curious for my taste.
th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/145/2/d/gentleman_king_sombra_by_gennbu-d66lvds.jpg And Sombra is, and will forever be the perfect gentleman.

1233483 I've beaten them. You must sit on the COMFY CHAIR!

1233487 NOOOO, NOT THE COMFY CHAIR! PLEASE :raritycry: Even the soft cushion are not that evil.

1233514 Well, at least it seems that I'm not the only one suffering from this torment.t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRkKWS37lY06Xr3xGK78c8EHIx4t5qIaq6tITE-Omw4Z_Q2YS88M8XkUvBcLw All hail the Muffins Goddess!

2122939 ... Give him wings and you get a ponified Deathwing :pinkiehappy::trollestia:

2122939 Yeah. He kinda does. Didn't you already find a pic prior to this?

2124953
...Huh, I guess he sort of does.:twilightoops:

2124957
I pulled this from on of our old PMs to show Arackn.

2127257 That explains why I recognized it.

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