– could you guys do me a favor and tell me what you think about the new version of chapter 4 (basically the first half of it is new)?
Chapter 5 · 3:26am Jul 22nd, 2013
I'm done with chapter 5! Not completely, because then I would publish it, of course. I just wanted to give you an idea of the progress. I'll need to review it, polish some things and then the proofreading starts. So there's still some time before you can read it. A good message though: It's longer than my previous chapters.
On another note, I also worked on improving my writing style, therefore I'm rewriting the previous chapters. Don't worry, you don't have to re-read them to get new information. I won't add new information relevant to the main plot, it's all about the style. In short: less telling, more showing. I have completed rewriting chapter 1 ("One of These Days...") and I think (and hope) you will like the new version – which is a bit longer than the old version. This also needs to be proofread, so I will release it together with chapter 5.
So long, have fun reading all the stories!
Brilorodion
