And I must say... it wasn't bad, I enjoyed it with all the cameos and stuff. But my God, the biggest joke there was that Flash Sentry... had a fucking Mustang. AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE HUMAN FROM A PONY WORLD... HAD A FUCKING MUSTANG. I WAS LAUGHING FOR TWENTY MINUTES WITH THAT SHIT. WE HAVE REACHED THE PINNACLE OF BRONY HUMOR, GO HOME COMEDY FIMFIC WRITERS (INCLUDING ME) WE HAVE NO BUSINESS
So, in this chapter, I didn't like how I ended it, how fast I progressed and how unnecessary somethings were... I made it more suiting to mine, and hopefully more your liking.
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