It's time to do some mechanic work

Well I looked back on Eithercite and Friendship Pursuit. I realized something. Their both filled with crappy simple structured sentences and grammatical errors.
The only thing this could mean is that it's fixin' time. I've learned quite a bit since those where written and it's time to hammer them into something better.
It's time for some renovation. I'm going to take what I got and reword the hell out of it. Eithercite may be a bit bigger than a rewrite thought. I might even just take the two chapters and make them one.

But anyway. Eithercite Chronicles= Big change edit.
Friendship Pursuit= Rewording the entire story but still basically the same.