Okay yay !

So i think u guys read my story "fluttercry" ...i know i know it was horrible but soon ill post up a new story ! Called "Dimentional love or hate?" its gonna be about butterscotch ,rainbow blitz,bubble berry,dusk shine,and last but not least applejack and the main six ! All the charachters belong to the people who created them! Trust me it will be better than fluttercry !!!!! Cant you wait cause i cant wait ! Oh my celestia im so exited !!!!!!!!!

Comments

[DWhay]

Okay, if you mastered your grammar, you would be an awesome writer. You have the grasp of concept and the raw material, but you need to smith the ore into something stronger and more refined, like iron to steel. Do that and you are well on your way to becoming a succesful writer.

Another thing I saw wrong on Fluttercry was was that you didn't seem to take the time to revise. Always comb through with your own eyes and spellcheck the chapter. Make them longer and more detailed and you will again have made an improvement.

I wish you the best of luck my fellow aspiring writer!

[fluttershyorpinkiepie]

Thanks :)