Chapter 3 · 5:01pm Jun 30th, 2013
So I have updated both chapter 1&2. It should read a lot smoother now. There is just one more scene that needs to be written and I'll tackle that on monday. then tuesday I'll have my editors look at it.
I read the story myself over and over again and make a few updates until i'm happy with it. so this means if it goes well chapter 3 will be posted saturday.