Finally Prologue Done

Finally my prologue for my first story is done (not pre-read yet). I'm not going to upload it here just yet, I want to see what you off think about it first.

Semaus Files (Working Title)

3,589 Words

General Discription:

Humanity takes a turn for the worst and blows it's self up. Amist the rubble an isolated lab remains. Unspeakable atrocites were commited there. Join one survivour's stuggle for survival.

Notes:

Ponies will come later, this is just the prologue. If you can pick it I already have a horse reference in there already. It's unedited so forgive any mistakes. Prereaders and editors would be greatly loved if they would offer their services

https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1FW3L3vmAv6Q4mJO053ugCWWpCkaBDK5F6ePsGwZ4w30