BronyWriter's review of Last

BronyWriter reviewed Last for the Equestrian Critics Society.

Overall it's pretty negative. I'm actually kind of happy about it because secretly I've been displeased with the story myself, and have been hoping for some negative criticism.

So now I'm not sure what to do with the story. Maybe a total overhaul, maybe steady as she goes, maybe cancelling it, and letting someone else pick up where I left off. I'm sorry to all you fans out there for my indecision.

Here's the deal:
If any of you were just itching to know how it ends, PM me and I'll send you a link to the Google Doc for the (incomplete) final chapter.