Comments on "That Sweet Sensation"

So I saw that my first clop/shipfic had some comments. This computer im on is kind of aggravating, so if the comments don't get back to you I'm sorry. But guys, if you don't like it, don't say anything. And this is only my first chapter. CALM DOWN! It takes time to write and I've been super busy. Chapter two is almost complete, I had enough time yesterday to actually sit and write. And again, if you don't like it,don't comment. Got it? I know I'm probably not the best writer, but I enjoy it, and I want my viewers to enjoy it. And if you don't.... that's your problem. Kay?